Fabulous house. Having full size beds, rather than queen size or larger is a deal breaker for a lot of people. If there is room for larger beds, I'd suggest change in bed size. From the pictures, it appears that the master bedroom is very small. If that's not the case, other pictures showing more of the master bedroom are needed.
Be sure you're competitively priced. The cost seems high to me but I'm not familiar with the area.
If the beach sticker for other towns is included in rental, I'd word it so it's clear there is no charge for the sticker.
I'm sure others will chime in with suggestions, especially on wording.
Best of luck with your new VR.
Susan